tips for badinage?

There’re two places I keep getting undone at:

  1. The hand-crossing bit in the front; the alternate does not work for me.
  2. Double notes on page 7.

Any general tips? I got all of it down in a week except these two parts still outstanding after almost two months.

1tip:

dun be afraid ov puzhin yo zpeedz which vil induce injury becuz u can alwayz wear a

bandage :whale:

shhhhh

eeeeeyatt :gav:

zzzz.

still horribel